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In Reply to: yeah! posted by Acheick on May 30, 2002 at 21:08:57:
Hi Acheick. The structure of your poem seemed to be Haiku in verse format. It has a nice flow and I got strong images from it. Here is a poem I wrote. hope you don't mind me sharing it. Poetry lovers are somewhat of a shrinking breed where I live. I once belonged to a poetry society. If you read one it was ok to share one.
Best Day:
Angel sun streams
Throw bright weight
past dark's fall.
In this life
grace will show
light lives on.
